Wheels of War
by blackjack

Comment:
A couple of things might help this image.... first a straight roof top across the top of the image. Secondly, perhaps you could have gotten a better angle to avoid the distractions in the background. Maybe through the trees with a shallow depth of field might help.

When two eras meet
by geewhy

Comment:
It would be good to be sure the scene is level. Interesting neighborhood. The colors in the background contrast nicely with the old building.

hazelnut warmth
by MarineWife717

Comment:
This would be better if you had cleaned out the used wick stubs (I don't know what else to call them) and mabe had a tad bit more light to make the orange stand out better.

Liquidate
by asij

Comment:
This captured my interest.... I think a bit of cropping on the left side would have made it more dynamic yet! I don't know how you did this...I like it.... I would make a great creative writing prompt.

All the Orange in my House
by seancgn68

Comment:
A different arrangement might be more eye pleasing. It is hard to move my eyes through the photo. Perhaps focusing on just one item might be better. The white background and the brown table are distracting together.

Dominoes
by Polecat123

Comment:
Perhaps less centered would give this a bit more piazzaz...?? I like the shadows and the tones.

Parallel Lives
by amandawriter

Comment:
I can't quite figure out what is at the top right on this photo.... I like the rotation of this. I think it adds to the parallel lines.

Reach
by Jamie2772

Comment:
I think the background keeps this photo from being a really good one... it is a bit distracting from the focus... it keeps the viewers eyes going in both directions instead of freely following the leading lines of her arms to the off camera compelling object. Other than that the composition is very good. Give my compliments to your model. She did a great job holding still for you!

My Sister Got Busted and I'm the One Who Did IT!
by Melly8522

Comment:
Oh, my! This is so pixalated. If you meant to do this ok... but if you need help making your photo the right size there are many who will help you learn how to do this...either that or I need a brand new monitor :) Seriously, I would be happy to help if you need it.

Off-screen attraction
by bormic

Comment:
I think that the background without any context makes this a photo that has no expectations... I am not sure the bra has enough interest for a wow photo. Interesting idea.