How to Tie a Shoe for Dummies
by jmritz

Comment:
A couple of the photo's are not uniformly processed. The first and third are a little brighter and the contrast is not quite uniform throughout. It could be due to the fact the person tying the shoe blocked your main source of light. You have the directional fill light from the left but the real diffuse ambient light is coming from behind and the person's body blocked it.

How To: Eat a Worm
by Lydia

Comment:
Great detail... makes me queasy, but great! Nice and sharp throughout. Great action. I could give or take the plane of focus. I would prefer more in focus but that is opinion. It is good as is too.

Greatness
by mbrutus2009

Comment:
Great action photo's! Especially hard in the low light gym, I am sure. There are two issues, one is important, the other is an opinion. The first is the difference in white balance between the first image and the last two. The walls are pinkish due to the light, whereas the other two photo's are nice and bright white. All three shots really need to be uniform. The second is the font selection. Not too fond of it. Too much stuff going on. Would prefer a white to maintain that uniformity.

Offbeat bokeh? Turn to page 2.8
by bspurgeon

Comment:
Rebel!

Luxury Shirt
by h2

Comment:
Nice example. Good photo's. Good Use-ability! Another skill I can entertain my 2 year old with!

Tyke Trike
by kitkatklok

Comment:
Hey... Rembrandt lighting!!

Addison 6 Months Old
by Shea927

Comment:
Definitely a cutie and a natural model! Great Pose! The lighting is nice and even. Great catch lights in the eyes. The picture could be a tad sharper and a tad brighter overall. But otherwise excellent!

Daddy, do you see me growing?
by Darkpixel

Comment:
Cute toddler picture. Tbe focus seems to be either a little in front of or a little behind the eyes. But those eyes are huge, almond color and beautiful. I think the color overall is a little cool and could use a little warming up with a white balance adjustment.

Mother's Love
by sina_kh

Comment:
The viewpoint chosen is a little unflattering. It is just leading me inside the woman's nostril and I am sure that is not where she would want the focus point to be. Otherwise the scene is very cute and warm and the relationship is felt.

Ache.
by herfotoman

Comment:
The perspective on this helps to create a greater feeling of emptiness.