It is that easy
by Atsugi

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

First Impression: I got the idea you were trying to portray but there were a few things that could have been improved.

Composition: The very top of the picture has the background above the counter, actually I think it's the counter edge. Cropping just a little bit higher or lower and straightening the picture to include the counter as a small border at the top or to eliminate it completely would have been better than having a sliver of it diagonally. It's not super noticeable though so not a big detraction. Oh and one other thing would be to include a little more space at the very bottom. As it is now the Comet can is cut off.

Subject: Subject and message is good. I would have liked to see the man and Comet a little brighter with the dishwasher in the back a little darker. I like that the dishwasher is in it, gives you a location rather than just any random floor.

Final thoughts: My goal in every challenge is to beat my average and you succeeded in that, and congratulations on your picture making it into your top 5 highest rated on your profile. Good luck in future challenges!

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Senay

Black Diamond
by keyz

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

My first impression was whoa this person went all out on the challenge! The blue and red complement each other greatly. Somehow I got stuck with critiquing all the top pictures of the challenge, really not fair. Someone mentioned that there is dust in the background. This may be true but I think it might simply be snow falling. If it is in fact dust then it actually adds to the scene.

I do like this version better than your outtake. In the outtake the tool (I don't actually know what it is called) seems to be overshadowed by the mountain in the background. I also ike the wider landscape shown in this one.

It's a very good product shot with nothing to change or fix really, you should consider contacting Black Diamond :). Sorry I couldn't be of more help!

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Senay

Lens guts
by Yo_Spiff

Comment:
Omg noooo! Note to self be extra careful with the 50mm.

Week 11 - The Fishermen
by jasonlprice

Comment:
I saw this in the recently uploaded images and just had to comment. I love the silhouette and the clouds look great!

088.jpg
by marcwsc

Comment:
This is very nice, lovely shadows as well!

Beach pairs edit
by Melethia

Comment:
I like this one more than the colour. Starting yesterday it has finally been warm enough to go for bike rides. Wish I lived somewhere warm that I could do that year round. I'm jealous.

IMG_61262-comp-crop-med.jpg
by bobonacus

Comment:
Hello, I'm attempting to comment on all of the pictures on DPC that have zero comments on them.

Great detail in the eye and really nice colours!

Rocket Man
by thomaspeople

Comment:
Hello, I'm attempting to comment on all of the pictures on DPC that have zero comments on them.

This certainly shows off the raw power that weapons are capable of, wow!

Tabasco- made with peppers
by kellmak10

Comment:
Sorry to hear about the DQ :(, looks like I finished that critique not long before.

Aquaracer by Tag Heuer
by Covert_Oddity

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

How is this fair? I just critiqued the blue ribbon for this contest earlier. I hardly feel like I'm qualified to critique your picture, but I'll give it a shot. :)

I'll start off with the negatives. There are none haha. Hmmm if there was one thing I'd change though it would be to have the reflection of the watch face showing instead of shining so much light. Actually your way works good to isolate the watch face from the reflection so as to draw the focus to it.

I like the DOF, the water droplets look great in focus and in the back too. I hope you weren't expecting an extremely helpful critique, there's really nothing to improve . You placed third and have a new personal best, congratulations!

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Senay