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by Paul

Comment:
really great shot this. I love how you popped the lips and the lighting that you have used. NOt being able to see the models eyes really give a sense of mystery here. Big kudos shoud go to the model as well for all the work she has gone into eps those eye lashes. Did you get a shot with her eyes open and looking at the camera in that pose as well?

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by kingskingdom

Comment:
good implied nude with a beautiful model. I would remove the love heart tattoo. Also perhaps you should have got her to bring a skin coloured bra as the peach colour is coming though the hair

a certain charm
by photokariangel

Comment:
really nice self portrait with a nice pose and good camera angle. Love the way the depth of field works here. I would have liked it if the hyper focal plain also included your lips as right now its going from the hair line to your eyes. maybe f3 so that your hair is still in focus. Well something to think about anyway.

If you want to shot other people just go out and make some attractive friends, or you can bribe younger brothers and sisters with chocolate.

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by bobonacus

Comment:
I like the fact that you have taken an unusual crop for a hi-key shot. Personally I don't think this shot really works but I cannot really put my finger on why.

blush
by Lutchenko

Comment:
nice pose with an interesting angle. You model does appear to be a little bit uncomfortable stretching so far back judging by her brow lines. Maybe raising her shoulders up with a small pillow underneath would have helped her out for this pose. I am sorry to say that I am not a fan of the checks the colour just looks out of place here. Leave it as a nice bw shot or hand colour the whole image if you want that look.

by yanko

Comment:
nice portrait with a good pose. Did you try adding some more contrast as the image appears a touch flat. I would have also tried to get the model to spread (is possible) her hair over the right shoulder so it block the shoulder.

Day Five
by LMA128

Comment:
nice self portrait. I would be happy with a shot like that. The high key touch here works well as does hiding you of your eyes to add a little bit more mystery. I would remove those few loose hairs in post production or be extra careful when taking the shot. To see a little bit more of your lovely eyes try moving the soft box (it looks like one anyway) around (closer) a little bit further so that it reflects off the white of your eye. Or you could tile you head around to the camera a bit more.

A Woman with a Veil
by denbote

Comment:
nice simple portrait shot. The combination of high iso and post processing really does give it an old fashioned painting feeling esp as its almost a monochrome (except for the eyes). I am not the biggest fan of the halo around your models head. Also part of her woollen top is casting a shadow on her face which is a little bit distracting.

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by bobonacus

Comment:
wow i really love how this hot has evolved from that first colour version. I really like this shot and I think that this is as good as you can do with the post processing.

Em & M sad in hall
by sadiebird

Comment:
really good capture. I hate to think how they will react when they are teenagers! I would have a go at burning the tiles on the left of shot so that side is constant. It would have been great if you got the shot about 3 seconds earlier so em may have looked a touch happier for a good juster position shot. Good lighting by the way.