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| 01/13/2006 11:58:13 PM |
Kisses...Mum!!by KitaComment: Greetings from the Critique Club
The impression I get from this photo is a mother who is kindly tolerent of the son she loves, but whose antics have made her a bit tired. It's an experience I'm sure all mothers are familiar with, and captured perfectly here. The high contrast, cool toned, monochrome treatment enhances this feeling and adds to the somewhat stiff pose and neutral expression. Great soft focus, good exposure, overall technically well done.
There are a couple of distracting elements: the boy's left arm (I assume) is motion blurred, so doesn't match the rest of the photo, and the pattern on the pillow; I think a solid color would have worked better. But these are minor; overall this is a very effective photo. |
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| 01/06/2006 11:52:11 PM |
Legsby shankswareComment: Oversharpening is usually distracting, but the high acutance works very well here. Great color choice too. |
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| 01/06/2006 10:52:09 AM |
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| 01/06/2006 10:50:50 AM |
A Chain Link of Shapesby climbin2thetopComment: Nice patterns, but a little boring. The link near the top left is a bit different; put that on a "rule of thirds" point to add some interest. |
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| 01/06/2006 10:46:57 AM |
Old post circles.by abroken1Comment: A striking image. The lighting brings out the textures. Good black and white subject. I wish it was a little sharper. |
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| 01/06/2006 10:43:39 AM |
Bird's eye view on my eggby HungaroComment: Great arrangement of an interesting variety of shapes, colors, and textures. It could make a very nice photo. I think it would be better in a square format, with the table centered. It certainly needs sharper focus, and a completely yellow yolk would be a big plus. I'm torn over the lighting; it seems too harsh for the rustic country breakfast feeling the photo exudes, yet I like the interesting shadows. I assume it was taken outdoors in sunlight. Couldn't you have arranged for a nice cloud to soften the light? No, I don't know how to do that either! But a white poster board set up to the left somehow would reflect back some of the sunlight and lighten the shadows. |
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| 01/04/2006 11:26:54 PM |
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| 01/04/2006 11:24:11 PM |
La Merby ZoomdakComment: Great treatment; this is beautiful. I wish the tree wasn't blurry or oversharpened. |
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| 01/04/2006 11:21:56 PM |
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| 01/04/2006 11:19:31 PM |
Oooo Shiny Shapes!!by GivemeashotComment: Rather busy, with no focal point to provide a place for my eyes to rest. The soft focus helps a bit by making the photo more abstract, but it isn't able to go far enough to make this a very effective photo. |
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