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01/16/2006 12:28:30 AM |
Thanks for the critique BMacD! I thought the rings stood out pretty dominant, but I guess as strong as their white is, the black radial cracks as just as strong.
I should have put my camera on the monopod I had with me, but was lazy and handheld it at the edge of the shutter speed/focal length balance. That would have probably addressed the sharpness that a few of you mentioned.
Popdeepop, you're right. I didn't even think of it at the time. I should have lost the teleconverter and shot the edges of the post which was square, adding to the shape theme. |
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01/13/2006 01:11:05 PM |
Hi! Hereâs a comment from the Critique Club.
First impression: Lines and rings draw you into the center, then out and around following the radial cracks. Very center focused.
Find the picture very busy. Lots & lots of minor shapes making bigger shapes, but no dominant, clear or central shape. Picture has very strong âtextureâ
B/W works well for this shot and I like your lighting. The lighting exemplifies the texture comment. Could be a little sharper.
Feel you met the challenge, but you may have had too many âshapesâ :-)
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01/09/2006 06:26:18 PM |
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01/09/2006 12:57:17 PM |
| i think the simplicity of this shot is what makes it so great. the clarity and the lighting are supurb. black and white was an excellent choice for this- very nicely done |
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01/08/2006 09:36:10 AM |
| much more about pattern than shape |
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01/07/2006 12:09:24 PM |
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01/07/2006 06:53:29 AM |
| Strong textured shapes here..... |
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01/07/2006 12:27:57 AM |
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01/06/2006 01:03:17 PM |
| This is a wonderful photo. 9 |
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01/06/2006 10:46:57 AM |
| A striking image. The lighting brings out the textures. Good black and white subject. I wish it was a little sharper. |
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01/05/2006 06:19:24 AM |
| could have been sharper IMHO |
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01/04/2006 03:14:50 PM |
| The natural pattern is nice. BW works. Why not more of the post? |
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