Dinner Time.
by ebuelna

Comment by KarenB:
Critique Club Assignment:

Initial: Nice tones ... antique feel, interesting light.

Technical: Good composition. The lighting is nice, however there is grain in the dark areas. Could be a bit more in focus in some areas.

Suggestions: Since it has an antique feel, and uses antique or old fashioned-feel/diner-feel shakers I think an area of improvement would be the clock hands moved to the 5:00 position. 5:00 was the traditional time for dinner before this world became crazy,.. in America at least.. I don't know where you are from off hand so maybe this is different.
Anyway, the point is the clock saying something arbitrary like 6:33 has less impact than, say 5:00 or even 6:00..

Dinner Time.
by ebuelna

Comment by falvey:
The lighting is Great!

Dinner Time.
by ebuelna

Comment by pinback:
Nice lighting and mood.

Dinner Time.
by ebuelna

Comment by Dustin:
good pic. nice job.

Dinner Time.
by ebuelna

Comment by Buddaflydank:
hun

Dinner Time.
by ebuelna

Comment by 'Pong:
This is very fine lighting. Good job.

Dinner Time.
by ebuelna

Comment by Artifacts:
Nice still life. The shadow on the clock face conveys the passage of time in a subtle way. Good light angle.

Dinner Time.
by ebuelna

Comment by Jeileen:
Nice. Contrast and shadows - generally can't go wrong.

Dinner Time.
by ebuelna

Comment by Shiiizzzam:
Ohhhhh this is my fav so far ! The tone and light just sets the mood. The awesome shaker ect are right on ! This is my first 10 ! What a great print this will make !!!!!

Dinner Time.
by ebuelna

Comment by justine:
Beautiful shot....lovely light....nice nice work.