untitled
by highprice

Comment by MrAkamai:
Some noise throughout the photo and focus seems just a tad off on the boat and considerably more on the buildings in the background.

Gold Plated Rust
by highprice

Comment by autool:
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 4
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 7
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 2
How well does it meet the challenge: 10
Total Averaged Rating 5.75 Dick

Gold Plated Rust
by highprice

Comment by Kathyc:
No real strong focal point. The "flat" area in the lower right of the photo takes away from the stronger areas of contrast and texture higher up.

lord of the flies
by highprice

Comment by melismatica:
This is a nice shot. I like the subject matter and the choice of black and white. Overall, it's a good composition. Some problems I have with it (outside the rather sinister implications of the title) are that you cropped the foremost boy's legs at an awkward spot and it looks like an amputee. If you had moved a bit to the right, you might have avoided splitting the second boy's face in half with the fishing pole.

Gold Plated Rust
by highprice

Comment by orussell:
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 4
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 5
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 2
How well does it meet the challenge: 6
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 4

Gold Plated Rust
by highprice

Comment by admart01:
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 4
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 2 (wider dof would help as would less-flat lighting)
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 2
How well does it meet the challenge: 4
Total Averaged Rating 3

Gold Plated Rust
by highprice

Comment by strongheart:
should have all been in focus..