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06/17/2003 11:47:35 PM |
*Critique Club*
Interesting take for the liquid challenge definately meets the challenge. The focus is good. The composition is ok but might improve by being cropped so the egg isn't in the center. The one thing I don't like here is the color of the egg itself the shell is to creamy colored and the yolk just isn't as yellow as it should be which could possibly just be the lighting was to dark to bring out the true colors of the egg.
Very nice take for the liquid challenge keep up the good work.
Anna |
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06/10/2003 09:15:14 PM |
| I like the lighting here. |
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06/10/2003 04:12:36 PM |
| I like this a lot but I think with a more off-center cropping it would have been a little more effective for me. |
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06/09/2003 05:29:23 PM |
| a little undexposed, otherwise good shot |
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06/09/2003 11:17:19 AM |
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06/09/2003 03:05:43 AM |
| Honestly I think I would have preferred this without the front shell half being present, as I like the idea but that sort of takes focus (in the viewing sense) from the liquid part of this. I do like it against a black background, really makes it stand out as no doubt was the point. |
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06/08/2003 01:14:46 AM |
| I find the colors to be too subdued to be interesting, and there's not much more to this photo. |
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06/07/2003 09:42:58 AM |
| Interesting shot, just a little too dark though. 6 |
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06/05/2003 02:02:37 PM |
| cropping seems a little off |
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06/05/2003 11:20:05 AM |
| Great background/ use of negative space. Good lighting... perhaps could be softened just a tad. Good use of subject. 9 |
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06/04/2003 09:45:09 PM |
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06/04/2003 09:21:05 PM |
| I like the picture very much. However. I would have liked to see more light in it to bring out that yellow. Nevertheless, good joob. |
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06/04/2003 03:41:42 PM |
| All I can think of is having to clean up the mess........6 syamjonimi |
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