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02/13/2012 01:05:43 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
I like the simplicity of the shot and framing, great use of silhouettes and lovely tones in the sky. However I would have liked to see the three men spaced out a little more, they look to be stepping on each other's heels here, and they have so much room! I might have gotten the boy to act a little younger, leaping or running, but the more contemplative stride of the middle-aged man looks fine. Glad you didn't go quite so far as to give the eldest man a cane.
So the concept works for me, and the execution is hard to fault, except maybe shooting a little faster or dialing down the ISO to take out what little highlights there are in the sky. Overall a nice shot, keep up the good work.
Feel free to PM me,
Susan |
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02/06/2012 05:12:15 PM |
| Well titled and shot. Composition is perfect for my taste. Hope it does well. |
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02/06/2012 11:52:03 AM |
| Great job with the framing of this photo. |
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02/06/2012 02:57:02 AM |
| Sometimes simplicity is best. Great capture |
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02/01/2012 06:00:51 PM |
| Great use of negative space. |
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