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the three ages of man
the three ages of man
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Challenge: Free Study 2012-01 (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-5D Mark II
Lens: Canon EF 70-200mm f/2.8L IS USM
Location: Lyme Regis, UK
Date: Jan 2, 2012
Aperture: f8
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/100
Date Uploaded: Jan 31, 2012

this opportune capture just seemed to fall into place so naturally. I have tried to keep the sky as low key as possible to keep the emphasis on the three characters themselves

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02/13/2012 01:05:43 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club!

I like the simplicity of the shot and framing, great use of silhouettes and lovely tones in the sky. However I would have liked to see the three men spaced out a little more, they look to be stepping on each other's heels here, and they have so much room! I might have gotten the boy to act a little younger, leaping or running, but the more contemplative stride of the middle-aged man looks fine. Glad you didn't go quite so far as to give the eldest man a cane.

So the concept works for me, and the execution is hard to fault, except maybe shooting a little faster or dialing down the ISO to take out what little highlights there are in the sky. Overall a nice shot, keep up the good work.

Feel free to PM me,

Susan
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
02/06/2012 05:12:15 PM
Well titled and shot. Composition is perfect for my taste. Hope it does well.
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02/06/2012 11:52:03 AM
Great job with the framing of this photo.
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02/06/2012 02:57:02 AM
Sometimes simplicity is best. Great capture
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02/01/2012 06:00:51 PM
Great use of negative space.
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