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What to Expect the First Year by Arlene Eisenberg
What to Expect the First Year by Arlene Eisenberg
kimberlyMai


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Challenge: Book Titles III (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-350D Rebel XT
Lens: Canon EF 50mm f/1.8 II
Location: My bedroom
Date: Jan 18, 2012
Aperture: 6.3
ISO: 800
Shutter: 1/80
Date Uploaded: Jan 21, 2012

Here`s my baby Keean, he`s five months now. My main goal was to capture softness. I`ve sharpen his eyes and edited a little bit of the hair since he started to lose some :)

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02/04/2012 11:19:25 AM
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Lovely shot, Kimberly-Mai. Great use of the white to offset Keean's colouring, though maybe using a reflector in front of his face would have helped to light him without bleaching out the rug. Crop looks a little tight; the comp is otherwise OK. I'd try doc's suggestion, methinks he knows what he's on about!

Feel free to PM me,

Susan
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01/29/2012 07:52:57 AM
Nice focus on the eyes, could benefit from a tad more curves. Watch out for the white in front, looks somewhat burnt and keep drawing the eye from the model. You could have done a bit more on the eyes eg sharpening and lightning.
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01/27/2012 11:17:40 PM
Cute baby.
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01/27/2012 05:07:48 PM
As a father just past the first year, I must attest that such a title is grossly misleading :) Expect? HA! expect CHAOS! freakin' wonderful chaos!
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01/27/2012 01:00:06 PM
Such a full head of hair for that age.
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