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01/30/2012 10:53:11 AM |
The picture was actually made on our Couch table which is very small. The angle was my only choice for the setup, otherwise I had every time something of the room in the picture what I wanted to prevent. I tried to fill the Page but my handwriting is terrible. Thank's for the tip`s and comments!
Message edited by author 2012-01-30 12:25:38. |
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01/27/2012 04:53:24 PM |
| Great exposure/lighting/setup/idea, but IMHO the composition is a bit off. |
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01/27/2012 03:00:16 PM |
| A good shot with many elements the invoke the feel and mood of the book. However there are some things that you could have done to make this image stronger and more appealing to look upon vaulting it out of the average shot and into the above average shot. First off, an overhead shot makes the image flat and static - there is no mood/mystery/intrigue. A different angle would have made this more interesting. Try shooting from a lower angle and to the side that way more interesting details in the shape of the book, the candle, and the feather pen would show. An overhead shot makes the candle look like a flat circle - lower angle would show the long shape and the flame. A lower angle would also give the feather pen some dimension. All objects here are flat and one dimensional because they are flush with the surface of the desk- a change of angle would give them more a three dimensional aspect. An off side angle (where the book edge would lay on the diagonal to the top left and top right corner would give the eye and interesting angle to look upon...almost like we are approaching the table. |
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01/27/2012 01:26:41 PM |
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01/24/2012 02:19:23 PM |
| This looks like it is set up on the floor, which is throwing me off.....I like the lighting though. |
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01/23/2012 01:17:18 PM |
| too cliched? to have drawn a heart on the paper? just a thought |
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