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01/15/2012 05:51:29 AM |
A different angle or a shift of the shapes in the frame would have contributed to the composition of this concept, and the use of a diffuser or bounce flash would have softened the light, reducing the glare of the tobacco pouch. The highlight on the pipe is nice. |
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01/13/2012 07:28:27 PM |
The glare on the tobacco pack is quite harsh, a more diffused light might have been better; I'm not sure about the angle either, it sort of feel to me like looking at a wooden panelled wall, not a table and the things are somehow stuck to the wall sideways. I can't stand smoking and I don't care for smoking shots so a bit of personal bias on my part here but the subject really quite unappealing. Focus and colours are Ok. |
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01/13/2012 12:21:16 PM |
Something strikes me as 'weird' about this but I'm not really sure what...could be the angle the photo was taken. (no vote) |
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01/11/2012 01:46:51 PM |
very uninteresting angle, and seems strange to have chosen this angle when it has been one thats caused a harsh light on the tobacco packet, drawing the eye to the packet and away from the main subject. I don't know what your chosen light source was though of course. |
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01/11/2012 12:51:59 PM |
Different take on the subject. I like that!
Technically: Kinda a funny angle. A little lower might be beneficial. The flash also kinda ruined it. A long exposure with a tripod might have given better color, and no flash reflections. |
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