I like the way you cropped this. For me the female has either got too much make up or too much post editing when compared to the man. Perhaps it was your intention to make them so "different" (even the skin tone is very different). It doesn't work for me personally. I like the hats - nice touch
Lovely, but the difference in the skin tones is really dramatic, as is the pp'ing on each face. It's like two different images were spliced together. Nice overlay, which now that I think of it, might not be legal. Good luck
Love the styling, her eye make-up is nice and his expression is funny; I'm not keen on the close crop though, would've liked it to be a little further out to see more of their body language. Different lighting would have helped this for me I think, something a little softer and brighter, just a personal thought.