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The crop feels cramped, I think this would have worked a little better zoomed back a bit, maybe even in landscape orientation. There's an unpleasant shadow at the back of the mother and down the right side of the girl's arm, a different light source may have helped, like a ceiling-bounced flashgun; the light as it is is a bit flat. A sweet idea though (I wish more parents would read to their kids these days!) and a lovely little girl. |