When I see your photo I really think I have to start learning something about photoshop... Very nice effect !!!! I like the photo just as it is, but I guess that probably some people won't like to see the veins in the eye. Maybe it would have been also a good idea to remove them
I don't find eye close-ups very interesting (just personally) but the focus is really good. Well done on not majorly oversaturating the selective colour as many people do on an edit of this style.
Nice idea and well framed. I am uncertain about the high contrast in the skin and eyelashes, perhaps a softer look would have given even more prominence to the eye. But that's just my taste.
Not too fond of selective color, but here it works ok I guess. Would have loved if you took away some of the red (now gray) streaks in the white of the eyes. Also, a bit smoothing of the skin around the eyes would keep focus on the eye itself - my eyes wonder to the top and bottom right all the time...