Good shot...
Possible ideas for improvement.
The grey chair back is very distracting. If you absolutely need the chair. Perhaps buy a large white napkin and cover it so it is less distracting.
Top of the head is cut off, not sure if this is pro/con.
Perhaps too much detail on the skin. You see the hair, freckles, etc. stand out too bluntly. (Many females are shy of such.)
Superb capture of the eyes!!!! And face/hair in general.
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