A bit more distance between you and your camera would have given more focus on your face. On the other hand, just 1 side of your face in focus is an unusual approach: original. I would have cropped out the edge of the mirror tough.
My eye wishes that at least one of the faces was completely in focus. The shallow DoF is just not working for me and your left eye so out of focus is actually making me blink because i think i have something in my eye causing it. Just feels wierd. A little clone work on the left side would be nice to to clean up the edge there.