good pose and concept, but the front-on light source makes for a flat face and glare on the bottom left portrait. bouncing flash off a side while using a darker pre-flash EV could eliminate both. either that or clone out the portrait in the corner but i'm sure you left that to suggest a family legacy which contributes to this photo well.
Nice to see such a fine gentleman elegantly dressed. I'm thinking you wouldn't lose much if you cropped out the distracting/busy lower portion of the image. And I think you could also crop the left edge, taking the subject off center for a very strong portrait.
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