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07/20/2003 11:56:37 PM |
Originally posted by UberFish:
The three points of interest (books, penci on peperl, open book) are all in the top helf of the frame and have equal weight. Close in on the subject till the boopks are half out of frame, and the paper is on a line of third. Use the pencil to point at a compositional element, or use it to underline some notes on the page (write a big A+ on the paper and use the pencil to draw the eye to that place). There is a big band of grey along the top of the image and a big band of dark along the bottom, both of these are de-emphasising the surface of the desk that the compositional elements are sitting on. Try not to have upside down writing, the viewerwill read it anyway, so make it easy (unless you want it upside down for a very specific purpose). Lighting is horrible, try not to use the flash if you can help it. |
im doing my homework |
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12/22/2002 10:23:48 PM |
| I would prefer being able to read what's on the note paper - lack of focus and too much light on the paper makes this impossible. |
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12/21/2002 06:38:07 PM |
| Better you than me. I had enuff schooling for now. May go back one year.....-vw4lyfe 7 |
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12/20/2002 10:19:20 AM |
| The three points of interest (books, penci on peperl, open book) are all in the top helf of the frame and have equal weight. Close in on the subject till the boopks are half out of frame, and the paper is on a line of third. Use the pencil to point at a compositional element, or use it to underline some notes on the page (write a big A+ on the paper and use the pencil to draw the eye to that place). There is a big band of grey along the top of the image and a big band of dark along the bottom, both of these are de-emphasising the surface of the desk that the compositional elements are sitting on. Try not to have upside down writing, the viewerwill read it anyway, so make it easy (unless you want it upside down for a very specific purpose). Lighting is horrible, try not to use the flash if you can help it. |
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12/18/2002 10:52:20 PM |
| I miss doing homework... :-( |
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12/18/2002 02:29:07 PM |
| it may be, but it helps you practice what you need to learn, especially math :) |
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12/16/2002 09:55:33 PM |
| Need a tighter image. Too many items widely spead out.....cropping could have been tighter as well.....5 |
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12/16/2002 07:47:43 PM |
| Your biggest problem with this whole photo is ---- it is a lie!!! No student ever studied at this neat of a desk. I love the color of the desk, and feel you should have used the desk as the entire background without any of the wall. I personally think you cropped it a little too tight on the left side. Should have let the edges of the books be in, even if you had to slide them closer to the paper, like the text book is. That would have made it more uniform, also. Otherwise, good shot worthy of a 7. PTL |
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12/16/2002 04:57:27 PM |
| But at least you get to attend school, right? It could be worse! |
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12/16/2002 04:30:10 PM |
| Over rated - YES - nice shot. |
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12/16/2002 12:26:35 PM |
1)Does the photo meet the challenge?(6)
2)Color:(5)
3)Composition:(5)
4)Focus:(6)
5)Background:(5)
6)Lighting:(4)
Overall Score:(5.1 Rounded to 5.0)
Commentary:
I think the Idea here is good. The real problem in my oppinion is the light. There is a major glare on the edge of the furn. With on camera lighting there is little that can be done. Especially if you have a point and shoot Cam. The best thing I can say is diffuse this flash with something but if you do that with a point and shoot then the metering will not be right for the cam to take the picture. Do not know what to say.
John (TurboTech) |
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12/16/2002 12:10:25 AM |
| Clever idea and great composition! |
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