It's a good macro, beetles are well focused and composed etc but the lime green pushing of the leaf and BG is OTT and thus draws attention away from the bugs. I'd have masked the leaf, BG and not overdone the saturation there, just the bugs
I'm assuming this is a retake of Beetle Mania. The lighting is muched approved in this image as well as more vibrant colours. Do you run a beetle porn site?? :-)