Critique Club Critique
(1) COMPOSITION (CONTENT) – A good photo of a seaside. Good use of 3 elements – grass, rocks & water. Nice diagonal across the frame. Water shows some foaming, hence some motion. However, the content is “average”, hence all the 5’s & 4’s. That is, it doesn’t look like you worked at this, or thought a lot about it.
(2) BACKGROUND – The green grass probably is more dominant than you want a background to be.
(3) CAMERA WORK ,TECHNICAL – Good. Everything looks in focus.
(4) DIGITAL PROCESSING ,TECHNICAL - Looks a tad “dull”. Could be brightened up some in post processing.
(5) MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO – Good, but not spectacular. I wish you had walked down to the rocks, and shot primarily the rocks and surf. Then you might have gotten a wave washing over a rock – which could have been very good.
Jim msp
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