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Miss February
Miss February
albc28


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Challenge: Calendar III (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-50D
Lens: Tamron SP AF 28-75mm f/2.8 XR Di for Canon
Location: Mt. Arlington, NJ
Date: Jun 11, 2011
Aperture: 5.0
ISO: 250
Shutter: 1/125
Galleries: Fashion, Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Jun 12, 2011

This was a quick edit on a shoot with a model named Prentice. The red on red was just fantastic. I feel like I didn't do it much justice, but will re-edit it when i get to it and try to make it all stick out even more...as I saw it when I took the photo.

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Place: 101 out of 127
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Votes: 123
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06/24/2011 06:35:20 AM
Hi Anthony, welcome to the Critique Zone!

This is certainly an eye catching shot, but beyond that it doesn't really have the aesthetic appeal to keep my attention and there is nothing to say 'hey - February!' apart from the title. Hmmm. What to say?

Technical: There's nothing really wrong here. I'm assuming that you wanted the station to be identifiable or you would have opened up that aperture, but it isn't really an appealing background, if I'm honest - neither cutesey or gritty, just there.

Artistic: I think, on reflection, that it is the background where this shot falls down. The settings, perspective etc are all bang on for your model, but the way the background is displayed doesn't really add. You don't show much of it, the perspective of it doesn't show it to best advantage and the 'bits' (platform, sign, doors) don't tie together because of the very central, very large, positioning of the model in the frame.

I hope at least some of that makes sense, noting that it is always easier to critique than to shoot!

Happy hunting,

Frank.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/19/2011 11:56:41 PM
Interesting place for you to go to take a photo like this. She would have looked better with some green to contrast that RED dress she has on.
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06/17/2011 01:18:54 PM
Something strikes me as wrong about this shot- I mean, I like women, and scantily clad asses as much as the next dude does, but its all in your face like "here's ass and my huge tattoo." But, good pose and look on the model.
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06/14/2011 11:19:47 AM
Not sure on the exposure here.
06/14/2011 12:56:35 AM
I don't think the cheek shot is necessary. I would have given it a higher score if you hadn't done that. 6
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06/13/2011 01:11:35 PM
Nice pose and composition
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06/13/2011 01:03:26 PM
That's a lot of... red...
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06/13/2011 12:07:11 AM
wardrobe malfunction!
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