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Challenge: Calendar III (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-5D Mark II
Lens: Lensbaby Composer
Location: Richmond, KY
Date: Jun 8, 2011
Aperture: LB creative rose?
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/1600
Galleries: Macro, Lensbaby
Date Uploaded: Jun 8, 2011

I'm working on a new series of images with Lensbaby lenses and creative apertures to create painterly images.

I've found that working in more intense lighting conditions than what I normally shoot macro under helps create more interesting effects.

I am shooting scenes both with a focal point in focus and also with the images entirely painterly without an area of focus and love them both so far.

Statistics
Place: 26 out of 127
Avg (all users): 6.1905
Avg (commenters): 8.0000
Avg (participants): 6.0000
Avg (non-participants): 6.3429
Views since voting: 951
Views during voting: 246
Votes: 126
Comments: 11
Favorites: 3 (view)


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06/24/2011 06:16:22 AM
Hi Danitar, welcome to the Critique Zone!

The only thing that I disagree with on this photo is the score. 6+ is certainly a decent score but I think that in a Free Study, this could have gone up to a full point higher. It just doesn't really connect to the challenge except in the name. (You're not alone in this!)

I might have changed one thing - I don't normally comment on borders but I think that with a photo taken to give a paint effect, some sort of framing would probably be beneficial. Other than that, the composition, structure and lighting of this is simply masterly. I personally disagree with the comment asking for something to be perfectly in focus, I don't think that it would work with this effect, it's great just as it is.

I'm sure that we will be seeing more of you, and I look forward to it!

Happy hunting,

Frank.
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06/23/2011 10:26:04 PM
thank you for sharing your photo love your photo
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06/22/2011 02:30:07 PM
way under-rated! striking, beautifully composed, and incredibly creative. I have a renewed appreciation for the lensbaby.
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06/20/2011 08:21:37 PM
I very much like what you did, and the notes are much appreciated.
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06/20/2011 03:52:31 PM
The background was actually created by a creative aperture with the Lensbaby, so that was done in camera. The only editing was curves for contrast, a little brightening and such etc. All editing was done in Lightroom for this image. I love how this particular aperture does create what looks like overlays done in Photoshop. It does, however, have a very shallow depth of field when used with a close-up filter.

Thank you everyone for comments and critiques.

Message edited by author 2011-06-20 15:53:30.
06/20/2011 03:28:42 PM
Adding this image on Posthumous Ribbons, Part IV 's thread as underrated.
:)
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/19/2011 11:38:08 PM
Nice smooth edit on this. I like what looks like an overlay for the background... I just wish that the one thing in perfect focus was the yellow coming out of the flower.
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06/19/2011 03:06:59 PM
I really really like the abstract feel of this!!!!!
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06/16/2011 05:48:45 PM
wow, so painterly. I love how closely this balances between abstract and formal.
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06/16/2011 01:07:23 PM
Soft, whimsical, and lovely. Well done 7
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06/15/2011 04:52:30 PM
What a lovely softness you've captured here!
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