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Challenge: Point of View III (Basic Editing)
Camera: Nikon D40
Lens: Nikon AF-S DX Zoom-Nikkor 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 ED
Location: Hesperia, CA
Date: May 6, 2011
Date Uploaded: May 6, 2011

I took this picture in Hesperia high school's studio.
This is my first time entering dp challenge. Hopefully I do well and I want to thank Cesar and Justin for their assistance on the pictue.

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05/15/2011 06:05:58 PM
Seamless creative! Nice work. Not areally great light or defing focus nor picturely perfect. But a creative subject matter. I like it using a not to harsh light other time. But congrats to your exceptional idea.
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05/14/2011 02:53:42 AM
Thats a very crinkly wall ?
05/14/2011 12:25:43 AM
have to appreciate the creativity...
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05/13/2011 12:36:37 PM
I love it!
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05/13/2011 11:34:45 AM
Nice image, I actually like the way you can see the items propped up in this, would be better with different lighting though I feel.
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05/13/2011 01:36:06 AM
Great idea and executed pretty well. Perhaps due to basic editing or some other constraints you left visible few artifacts here and there, but that aside, composition is good, diagonal you make is great. Hope to see some time more clean version - and don't cut yourself :)
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05/12/2011 07:59:57 AM
ah. brilliant. still cannot entirely visualise how this was done. wish those few wrinkles top left could've been smoothed out !
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05/12/2011 06:06:31 AM
Excellent idea and quite well done.
what lets it down is the wrinkles in the wall, and the use of on camera flash. Also the feet being cropped off, and table on the left being cropped. Fore some reason I always though t it was an ironing board.
Using a light source that simulates a window or ceiling light would have been better. However you get extra points for the obvious thought and work you put into the image. 7
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05/11/2011 09:10:23 PM
Nicely done. I wish you'd been as detail-oriented with the lighting as you were with this great set-up. It looks like it's only one light, straight on, which makes the entire thing a bit flat. E for effort!
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05/11/2011 08:05:00 PM
figured it out... 5
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05/11/2011 02:13:47 PM
Fantastic setup! Shame the lighting is so flat though, would have been great to see that table lamp lighting up the room.
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05/11/2011 01:01:29 PM
the thing i dont like is the back drop is reankled
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05/11/2011 12:04:28 PM
I really like your idea here, but at a closer look I feel it would have been better if you more carefully hid the objects propping up the step and the lamp.
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05/11/2011 11:34:38 AM
Clever set up, must have taken awhile. Is that the abyss water drop photo on the wall?

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05/11/2011 10:55:51 AM
nice POV!
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05/11/2011 09:47:58 AM
I see you have been studying Gyban ... You did a pretty good job of this!! I'm sure you've problay got comments on this before but in case not, the lamp base is slightly askew and the cord loops up instead of hanging down. I DO LOVE how you flipped the end of your hair so it looks like it's hanging down in the air, Over all you paid a Lot of attention to detail, and I just really Like this!!
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05/11/2011 08:09:07 AM
Certainly deserves marks for creativity, even if the execution is a little less than perfect. The wrinkles in the 'wall' really do detract from the effect somewhat.
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