I love the red and the model is beautiful. IMO the eye in the background is distracting. I think if the background was just the blending of the colors it would work better. Still I like the placement of the model in the frame. Good work.
There's a lot that's good about this shot, but it lacks overall sharpness. It looks like you may have compressed the jpg way too far... there are blotchy artifacts all over the place, unfortunately.