Challenge:Motion (Classic Editing) Camera:Sony DSC-S30 Location: play zone Date: Dec 3, 2002 Aperture: f2.8 ISO: 1/30 Shutter: 282 Galleries:Candid, Action Date Uploaded: Dec 6, 2002
Composition/ Content I think the content is great – my favourite aspect is the way the motion makes her feet look so big – or is she just wearing socks that are too large? :) I like the expression on her face and the motion in her right hand.
Composition wise I don’t like the inclusion of all the netting etc at the top. Playing around with the shot my favourite composition is to crop it at top, left and right – I’ve taken the liberty of having a go and if you’d like to see it just drop me an email.
Background As above – I’d prefer to focus in on the little girl – with just the bottom lip of the tube showing – and above and to the sides of her only blackness.
Fits The Challenge Yep!
Your Opinion On The Photo Like it – it’s fun and engaging.
Great motion. I wish that the lighting had been just a tad brighter, however, if your camera is like mine (no shutter speed settings) you might have had to have low lighting to force the shutter to stay open just a bit? Her hair blends in too well with the slide, that is my reason for wishing there were more light if possible. Otherwise a nice shot of motion. Good luck in the challenge.
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