~~~~Critique Club Comment~~~~
Composition (content)
Original composition, I like the way treadmill guides you trough the frame and how the theadmills beyond that explain what we are looking at, what setting we are in. They also provide good depth and form a second diagonal trough the frame that leads the eye.
Nice motion blur.
Too bad that the power plug is plugged in and that the black of it contrasts so much with the wall, because it is a little distracting.
Background
The background is to busy, not that you have much control over it. The situation around the right leg isn't nice. A mirror on one side, more mirrors against the wall on the other side, with a lot of stuff. Would have been nicer without the mirrors.
Camera Work (Technical)
Good choice of shutterspeed, exposure is good, focus and depth is good. The only minus is the noise here and there (depends on what you like). Sharpness is ok, but tilts to the hard side with some lines, but overall ok.
Digital Processing (technical)
I tried a bit of unsharp mask in Photoshop and it depends on what you like, it could add something (right shoe and sock). On the other hand it oversharpened the diagonals.
Not much else to mention.
B&W is a good choice in my opinion.
My opinion
Good.
Message edited by author 2002-12-16 16:02:27. |
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