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Snowy Windows
Snowy Windows
mcrochip


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Motion (Classic Editing)
Camera: Kodak CX4230
Location: Frederick, MD
Date: Dec 5, 2002
Aperture: 4.47
ISO: 1/105
Shutter: 200
Galleries: Architecture
Date Uploaded: Dec 5, 2002

 The windows of my office during the snowstorm

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Place: 114 out of 167
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 12/19/2002 02:52:26 PM
Critique Club for Snowy Windows by Mcrochip

Composition - The biggest problem I have with this photo is that it lacks any real center of interest for me. The snow is nice (I live in Michigan and see enough of it every year) especially with the nice big flakes falling. The dark windows make for a great backdrop and contrast the falling snow nicely. It just sort of needs...well, a subject. The image does run a little uphill from left to right as well.

Background - This is the background. I keep envisioning a tall, thin wholesome looking girl with curly hair poking out from under her hat in a long dark wool coat catching snowflakes on her tongue.

Camera work - Nice job here. Well framed and settings adjusted pretty well to keep from being underexposed. The whiteness of snow has been known to give cameras fits from time to time. You did a great job capturing the motion of the snow.

Processing - Doesn't look like much was done here. That means not much was done, or that you did whatever you did well enough so that at least I can't tell

Overall - Technically, I think you did a nice job. But artistically, it really needs something to focus on more than the snow. The challenge of motion was met, but not much else. I don't think its a bad picture, but I think it really needs something (like a subject). - Inspzil


Message edited by author 2003-06-12 21:22:14.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/15/2002 11:17:32 AM
Nice shot.
 12/12/2002 08:47:18 PM
I'd like to see the brick cropped off the top. Otherwise, good.
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 12/09/2002 07:03:28 AM
This is good. You have managed to get just enough blur into the snow to give the feeling of movement.
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