Nicely captured, and I like the B/W post processing and the composition. Her shoulder-tilt looks a bit odd, and that leading arm seems to disappear out of the frame.
Really nice job with balancing the flash power against the sunlight. I'm not fully sure about the pose, but I think it brings out some of her style/attitude, so in the end I like it.
Great pose and setup of the model. Excellent use of the sun as a highlight. I can see you used the flash by the reflection in the glasses. I also like the B&W conversion. Something I noted immediately is the photo is not the sharpest...
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LIke the shot as it is a little different , your model looks a little uncomfortable on her right arm , shoulders slightly more relaxed and I think you would have nailed it.