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09/22/2010 02:01:43 PM |
| if the model were focusing more towards the camera (not at it but in the direction of it) or had her eyes closed i think i would of liked this better as is her eyes are a bit creepy to me 6! |
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09/22/2010 12:10:07 PM |
Everything about this image is awkward, and I can't tell if it is intentional, but it doesn't really work for me as there doesn't appear to be a reason for the awkwardness other than to be awkward (sheesh! how many times can a person use awkward in one sentence!!!!!)
Also, a little more attention to the details of the setting would be nice (here we are drawn to the imperfections on the back wall - lines, scratches, holes), and the band across the bottom bisects the image rather than contributes to it.
But clearly, something is working since it compelled me to write a whole essay! |
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09/22/2010 02:53:06 AM |
| Looks kinda awkward.. did she try to fit your frame? |
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