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10/05/2010 04:28:34 PM |
cclub
the picture has a serene feeling to it with a wonderful subject. However i feel it lacks a certain sharpness. The colors have a brown/yellow tint to them which clashes with the freshness of the subject. Also the chair has a really old feeling to it, which doesn't match too well with the subject. As has been mentioned, the white border is catching a lot (too much) of attention. While the subject is on a line within the rule of thirds, the cutoff of the knee distracts. A little more zoomed out could have worked better as it places her in a surrounding. A different chair (fitting with the subject), more upbeat lighting and sharpness would have made a top10 with such a nice subject imo. |
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09/28/2010 05:38:55 AM |
| I love this portrait very very much. The ambience, the expression on her face, the simple clean lighting, the chair, the chair seems full of family history. |
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09/27/2010 10:01:45 PM |
| Well done with the soft lighting and processing. I wasn't sure about the big white border at first, but with the subject, it does work. |
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09/22/2010 07:16:56 AM |
| I don't like the border.. the image is wonderful. |
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