In general, I feel like you can't go wrong when you've got a pretty girl in front of your camera. But this pose just feels awkward to me, and the harsh midday lighting flatters nothing in this scene.
A good effort in what looks like midday sun. Probably better than I could do in the same conditions. Lot's of blown highlights, however. I see some effort at highlight recovery and a grayish-blue patch of her hair where it may have been taken a little too far when there was nothing there to recover.