This is a nice shot. I like the soft processing and the choice of B&W. Two things I can think of to bring up here. I think the model is looking too far off into space. Try getting her to look a little bit more at you but not like right at you. Or perhaps you need to be a bit higher with your camera placement and not shooting up into her chin.
The other thing is the setting. This would look better using a brick wall or something urban, or even an old barn wall and something completely rural... but the garage door isn't relly doing it for me as far as the setting. I do like the horizontal perspective. |