Challenge:Photojournalism (Classic Editing) Camera:Canon EOS-D30 Location: New York City Date: Nov 20, 2002 Aperture: F4.5 ISO: 100 Shutter: 1/50 Date Uploaded: Nov 24, 2002
Critique Club COMPOSITION -CONTENT - I find this too centralised and I think taking it at an angle with the lens pointing upwards would have given a more dramatic effect The overall image could have been slightly brighter and crisper - YOUR OPINION ON THE PHOTO - although I am not an american I can relate to this scene and the sense of desolation the figure and flowers portray definitely a good shot at photo journalism
Timely news article. Good composition, execution needs some things. Photo needs lightened up some - so we can see the things hanging on the fence and their colors. Also need to see the man better. This is where your emotion is for this picture. Lightening the shot would have enhanced the emotion. Or that's my opinion. But women like the emotion of things. Otherwise good job. PTL8
Nice shot, given recent events I could certainly see this on the front page. The person in the photo is a nice touch, it wouldn't have been the same without them there.
good to see that the flowers haven't stopped arriving. "oh beautiful for patriot dream that sees beyond the years, thine alabaster cities gleam undimmed by human tears."
ahh yes finally someone meeting the "impact of the moment stated in the challenge".. the guy hanging on to the fence makes him seem to be pining away for someone that's not coming back.... ~anachronite