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Thorkell
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Challenge: DPChallenge User Portrait (Advanced Editing VII*)
Camera: Canon EOS-400D Rebel XTi
Lens: Canon EF 50mm f/1.8 II
Location: Reygjarvík
Date: May 11, 2010
Aperture: F/7,1
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/200
Date Uploaded: May 11, 2010

work from RAW to JPEG. 2 silver umbrella in studio.

Statistics
Place: 67 out of 83
Avg (all users): 5.1268
Avg (commenters): 6.0000
Avg (participants): 4.8333
Avg (non-participants): 5.2121
Views since voting: 785
Views during voting: 407
Votes: 213
Comments: 3
Favorites: 0


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/14/2010 11:29:49 AM
Nice job with the white backdrop, but it looks like all the light is coming from bottom left, try to make the light come from top left to hit his face more
05/13/2010 02:04:38 PM
looks like your going for a Richard Avedon feel here, with the clean background and the almost stern expression, which I love! I would push in closer, cropping closer to the waist, which would emphasize the subjects expression. Also in this kind of image i find the color distracting, I would really "Avedon" it out and go black and white! Overall very good image!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
05/13/2010 08:15:10 AM
It feels just a bit too far for me. While I can guess you wanted to get the hands in the pockets and keep the head on the top thirds line - it feels too far away and I can't see any detail in the face / eyes.


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