My only question is whether the white at the top of the picture draws the eye away from the main image due to it's brightness ? Other than that - very nice.
I find that there are too many hotspots.... you should check your histogram when your shooting.... also, you cut off her elbow.... coulda been so good.
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Just kidding :)
A great portrait Leo... you are developing a distinct style for fashion shots. Your next cover should be Vogue :)