nice gritty location. don't forget to try and get right in front of you model to avoid distorting the perspective (where the floor and wall meet is not 100% level). I am not the biggest fan of the pose her left arm just loops limp and weak.
Great location and lighting would have her turn her head a little more to the camera to better light her left eye and straighten the hair more. If she would place her hands on her hips or thighs it would add a little better look to the pose. Very nice effort.
Not bad, I like the wall, her outfit and the lighting but it just seems you could have done something a bit more interesting with this model and the surroundings. Like have her jumping, headbanging, standing up against the wall and looking intensely at the camera or something, it just seems to me she is a bit disinterested in this particular shot. 6
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