Not getting what I am looking at in the foreground. Would have much preferred the model in the background be wearing whatever that thing is. :) Good luck though.
nice idea. not sure if it would have worked better with the bra randomly placed i.e. like it had been dropped on the floor. still one of the better shots
I good idea, but i think the model in the back ground could be better lit. The focus also appears to be slightly out / would possibly be better placed with focus on the black lace.
I like the image of the out-of-focus girl on the couch, but... are those supposed to be breasts in the foreground? Knees? I can't tell what you are trying to convey here.
Nicely done. Love the depth of field and the story here. Only thing I would have suggested would be pulling back a bit, to see more of the bra. With this crop, it looks like the bra is some arms of a couch or something similar.