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Challenge: Natural Light Indoors (Basic Editing)
Camera: Canon EOS-40D
Lens: Canon EF 50mm f/1.8 II
Location: Hull, UK
Date: Apr 11, 2010
Aperture: F1.8
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/1000
Galleries: Emotive, Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Apr 11, 2010

My daughter Bethany
Taken indoors with natural light from window to the left and silver reflector held under her face and slightly to thr right.

Statistics
Place: 47 out of 158
Avg (all users): 5.6029
Avg (commenters): 7.4000
Avg (participants): 5.4328
Avg (non-participants): 5.6861
Views since voting: 862
Views during voting: 309
Votes: 204
Comments: 7
Favorites: 0


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06/07/2010 03:32:21 PM
This is a lovely shot, but the thumbnail looks amazing while the larger image is only good. On focus I agree with Mike, the narrow focus blurs much of her face, and when combined with the strong highlights on her fair skin, you have lost much of the skin detail that is so essential to a good portrait. Now when someone has a few wrinkles they want to hide, that is all well and good, but why hide her beautiful skin tone?

One other reason for the lower than expected score might be the hue. With her red hair and pink lips shifting away from the reds into the blues might have brought out more color contrast and have made her features pop. My daughter has similar coloring and I blue shifted the hue a touch on this one. I think it helps fair skinned redheads.


Im sorry if this comes off as critical, I think this is a very pretty shot, I was just trying to give you why I thought it might have scored lower than you thought it ought to have, or frankly could have. Same shot with deeper focus, a bit more USM, and a blue shift would have gone top ten IMHO.
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04/22/2010 08:55:26 PM
Thanks for the votes and comments guys and gals. Probably one of my most fav shots I have taken and a tad dissapointed it didn't do a bit better.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/20/2010 09:21:53 AM
lovely work on the eyes, not quite sure about the eye lashes here. I think that it would have been a very striking portrait if it was more high key like the left hand side of the shot, did you use a mirror or reflector in the dark side of her face?
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04/19/2010 12:10:08 PM
the way the light hits her hair looks nice
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04/16/2010 03:10:28 PM
gorgeous eyes....
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04/16/2010 02:13:43 PM
very pretty shot- top 10
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04/14/2010 08:01:28 AM
Good focus on the eyes. I wonder if you could have gotten away with a smaller exposure to make sure her nose and lips were in focus.
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