Greetings from the Critique Club.
Hello Kris , I’m Alan.
First I look and analyze the photo, then look at photographers comments. Based on that I think you did well in PP presenting the image as you wanted it, so I won’t nit pick, ok well maybe a tiny bit more contrast might have helped.
I copied your image and looked at a couple of things, first I flipped the image horizontal, now in this case it would not work as the sign would be spelled backwards, but I wonder if that perspective ( sign on the left) might have made the story easier for some ? I have a large wide screen monitor as I believe most on DPC do, even using F11 I had to scroll a bit to view all the image, I think you could easily have cropped 1/3-½ of the uneventful sky. I don’t know, have a look in your PP software, I thought doing both made for a stronger image.
All in all I appreciated the break from the mundane in this challenge, thank you for using your imagination..
If you have any questions on my insights please feel free to PM me.
Alan. |
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