Greetings from the Critique Club.
Hello Andy , I’m Alan.
Lovely shot, beautiful color, I’m jealous as hell.
In this challenge without the title “entrance”, is not a word that comes to mind, and why I think your score suffered the low 5’s. Lets add a little imagination.
Your lovely boat dockside, you the photographer on the dock (eyes of your passengers), on the boat a lovely model with a tray of tropical drinks, big smile looking at the camera. Now the photo says welcome (enter) and the title need only reinforce it, jump into the mid 6’s. Might also be great as advertisement.
If you have any questions on my insights please feel free to PM me.
Alan. |