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04/06/2010 01:10:24 PM |
Hello from Critique Club.
You had a good subject, but I have some ideas to transform your image in a better one:
1 - The colors are saturated. You can fix this with an image editor.
2 - The theme may be in the center of the image. It is not.
3 - You could placed your camera in a lower position. You could see the rocket from the botton. So the image would have a more dynamic view.
4 - You could shot this photo a little more far away from the subject. This will change the image in a more didatic one ( easy to undestand ).
Hope you enjoy my ideas.
Oscar Burd |
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03/30/2010 02:03:05 AM |
| Quite like the retro feel of this. Looks like cheap film. |
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03/27/2010 09:42:28 PM |
| the saturation and noise on this are really off-putting. |
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03/27/2010 06:31:31 PM |
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03/27/2010 12:51:32 PM |
| I'm not a fan of the processing - sorry :( |
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03/27/2010 10:36:47 AM |
| It is too grainy and too "busy" and poor composition. This is purely my point of view and I'll not vote on this one but if I would give it a 4 |
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03/26/2010 01:47:48 PM |
| Very cool water rocket! Photo leaves a lot to be desired, I'm afraid. Seems excessively grainy and soft looking. Not sure if there is much you could have done with it or not, though some noise reduction would certainly have helped. |
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03/25/2010 04:00:31 PM |
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03/25/2010 07:11:42 AM |
| lots of noise and the missel should really pop against that sky but it's kinda flat |
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03/25/2010 06:36:45 AM |
| Normally I wouldn't like this kind of processing, but here I feel it really fits the subject. |
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03/25/2010 06:11:46 AM |
| Great idea and well captured. For me the photo is over saturated and too noisey. But you can't deny that this hasn't met the challenge. Good luck |
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03/24/2010 02:41:04 PM |
| great concept clever title poor technical quality too noisy colors look strangely hued out of focus 5 |
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03/24/2010 12:18:40 PM |
| Looks like a fun toy. Seems a bit over processed. |
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03/24/2010 09:33:55 AM |
| not a fan of the film grain, but well captured and composed. |
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