I think you were trying to capture some interesting shadows with this, but it comes off to me a bit on the uninteresting side. Maybe a different angle? More abstract? Idunno.
Here I am again looking at a shot I scored low and wondering what I was thinking. I actually like this after looking again and again, it still isn't in my top picks but you have cleared your way from the low end. The ligh and shadows works nicely for this image and the trees are a nice addition.