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Challenge: Framing IV (Advanced Editing VII)
Collection: 2010 Challenges
Camera: Nikon D90
Lens: Sigma 10-20mm f/4-5.6 EX DC HSM for Nikon
Location: near Mountain
Date: Feb 22, 2010
Aperture: f.5
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/15
Galleries: Architecture, Horror
Date Uploaded: Feb 28, 2010

 Watch the stairs...shot in an empty farmhouse located near Mountain, Ontario. Thanks John, of Havelea Farms, for allowing me to have access to such a wonderful old house! I'm sure I'll be back in the future :-)

pp: RAW-TIFF conversion, rotate, contrast, resize, usm, sharpen, save for web

Statistics
Place: 64 out of 127
Avg (all users): 5.6103
Avg (commenters): 6.1429
Avg (participants): 5.5273
Avg (non-participants): 5.6667
Views since voting: 897
Views during voting: 225
Votes: 136
Comments: 10
Favorites: 0

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 03/10/2010 10:31:32 PM




Critique Club Critique

First Impressions
The 'frame' isn't the first thing I notice in the image. It's 'out of the box' and an odd angle, but the frame does indeed exist.

Photograph Information, Technicals & Composition Review
I'm trying to see if the angle/perspective grows on me the more I look at the image, and whilst it does slightly, I still find it 'unnatural' enough that it doesn't sit well to view.

I do wonder about it converted to b&w/toned and whether this would enhance the 'framing'.

Comments, Score & Placement Review
64/125 very middle of the pack for an 'unaverage' image, so I guess this is indicative for you.

A lot of positive comments, yet a total average from them of 6.5, perhaps doesn't resonate that well with what they have said.

Summary
I think there is potential with the staircase and the framing aspect but there is a lot else going on in the image that it competes too much for attention. The 'vertigo' aspect, whilst existant, perhaps could be enhanced by a variation in the angle/perspective, 'next time'.
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 03/08/2010 07:08:28 AM
Very cool shot and a muaimho. I am posting this on Posthumous Ribbons, Part IV
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
03/07/2010 06:14:30 AM
Interesting angle.
5
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 03/04/2010 01:11:44 PM
Nice strong perspective.
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 03/04/2010 12:03:14 PM
I like the shot...The tilt works great with the banister "framing" the stairs...Good job
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 03/04/2010 11:53:03 AM
love this composition!
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 03/02/2010 08:46:31 AM
Looks like brand new stairs have made it into a renovation project. Narrow, certainly, but it looks like an interesting older house. The off-kilter angle encouraged my eye to wander around the scene.
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 03/01/2010 09:39:14 PM
Weird angles threw me for a second, then I saw a really cool image. well seen and composed
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 03/01/2010 06:47:23 PM
Oooo, vertigo!
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 03/01/2010 12:58:58 AM
The perspective on this is great and the processing is nice, too.
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