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11/23/2002 10:18:00 PM |
| Great shot. Show this to the high up there and tell them they need to paint before the bridge rusts away and falls. It's the rust that adds authenticity to the shot and makes it interesting, not squeeky clean bridge. Good focus. In fact, nice techs all the way around. Just needs a little more "wow" to jump out and grab you. PTL |
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11/22/2002 11:09:00 PM |
| I like all the rust in this picture. Composition is a little cluttered. I think you included too much in here. Maybe a tighter crop to eliminate things like the building on the left, and the cut off light up on the right. I sincerely hope these suggestions help, and please remember they are only MY ideas. Grayce |
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11/20/2002 09:51:00 PM |
| hmmmm. Well could be better. |
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11/20/2002 08:38:00 PM |
| I would like to see more detail in the shadow areas. |
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11/18/2002 08:33:00 PM |
| My feeling is that the shadows are too harsh for this picture and don't contribute. I think pushing more light into the dark places (with white reflectors) would have enhanced the overall impact of the picture. |
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11/18/2002 07:05:00 PM |
| Love rust. Might of been a bit too bright there in the sunshine, although I like the shot. |
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11/18/2002 04:07:00 PM |
| A little out of focus but very interesting. I don't see how it could still be a functioning mechanism with the amount of rust and decay...I like that I stayed and studied this for a while. Good job. joann |
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11/18/2002 12:48:00 PM |
| I don't think the rustic (or just rusty) nature of this equipment really says "technology" to me. |
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11/18/2002 01:05:00 AM |
Technically correct , exposure, focus, saturation , contrast. 8
Good composition. 6
Tells a story or creates a mood 6
Impact to the viewer
Relevance to the Challenge 9
Overall 8
sulamk
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