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Date Uploaded: Feb 23, 2010

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02/23/2010 06:17:51 PM
My first impressions were that I really like this pose and wow his eyes seem really white.

Composition: I really like this pose and it seems to work well for this shot, however I think this may work better if you cropped a little more off the top so that the eyes are on one of the thirds. Also not sure how well the barb wire works with this, I kinda like the feel it adds but I don't like how the lines compete. Maybe if the barb wire was horizontal or if you framed the shot on both sides with the wire, that may work better.

Lighting: I like the lighting on this and feel it is done well.

Artistic feel: Very nice, it definitely has a good artistic feel to it.

Processing: In my opinion the processing takes away from this shot. The eyes seem far too white and the skin almost plastic. I think this would look nicer if the eyes looked more natural.

Overall: Good job. I like the feel you have with this shot and just keep at it and you will have some amazing portraits.
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