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03/01/2010 02:06:15 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club.
First impressions are of a great sense of scale.
Technically this is ok. There are a few areas that show the lighting could be a bit softer - the front of the car and up near the shoelaces - I see you used a softbox though - hmmm. The show has cast quite a big shadow that cuts right through the car. Composition is good and the DOF seems excellent.
Artistically this is good. Humor is often not rewarded at DPC. As commenters have mentioned, the POV could be adjusted to add a sense of drama too - maybe lower and more front on to the car?
In summary a good solid shot that I'd have rated a bit closer to 6 than it scored.
Feel free to PM me if you have any queries.
Gerry |
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02/28/2010 02:46:19 PM |
| good idea...nice and sharp |
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02/22/2010 09:46:19 PM |
| lol...nice way of incorporating humor into the shot |
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02/22/2010 12:34:27 PM |
| Light is good, interesting idea. I'd like the boot at more of an angle (not sure how to do this) to add some drama to the scene. Composition wants to be angry and I see a passive boot position. |
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02/22/2010 01:06:28 AM |
| Very clever, excellent lighting. |
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