Hi from the Critique Club...
Very colorful image here! I love the motion of the merry go round.
I would have liked it better if something was in focus, it looks like you tried it hand held. 4 seconds is a long time! The other thing is the light in the center is really bright and is a distraction. I don't know if there was another angle that would have minimized it, or if that's just the way it was. In any event, a large distracting element like that will get lower scores than one without.
I think it's quite artistic, even with all elements blurred and I rather like it. Now that the challenge is over, maybe you could try cloning the light out and see how you like it.
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