Technically this is a good shot as the result shows. I think the crop doesn't show off the model to her potential - square might have been the way to got here. There seems to be a lot of noise(?) in the background that is quite distracting.
Artistically you can't go too wrong with a model like this. Her eyes look very unnatural however, more then the entire "unnatural" look that the lighting/processing gives.
In summary a great shot that has heaps of potential but a couple of nitpicks held it back from the top 10.
I love the pastel-type soft look and the composition is good, but there's something about her left eye that's drawing my attention away from the overall shot.